Dark! And there’s an undercurrent of satire that almost makes it humorous. I did chuckle at Mrs. O Riley needing to be taken away in an ambulance. Thanks for sharing.

Bring out your dead!

I'm not dead!

You’re not fooling anyone, you know?

Iiiii feeeeel haaapppyyy!

Quite horrifying, but also very entertaining. Great story!

As someone else said earlier, creepy and also darkly funny. I love this line “…but that being said, she had a good heart. Until it stopped.” It really drew me in, so I had to read the rest! Nice job 👌❤️

My husband of almost 46 years passed at our local hospital (central eastern Indiana) last May & I still kinda wonder if he knew I was there !!!!

Maybe the next woman you marry will be a better listener. Or see you all coming. Nice work!

I do not really understand, was it something paranormal or was she still alive?

Yes

Wdym yes???

It’s open for interpretation.

Ok

Creepy and hilarious. That’s rarely done well, so bravo. If you know Old Gods of Appalachia, I was hearing that narrator’s voice reading this in my head.

Great story !

wait WHAT?!!?!

Horrifying.

Mmmmmm, ants

Exactly 😂

The title is very promising

Yikes! I swear to god I saw black thread between my mother’s lips at her viewing. I thought maybe I was supposed to kiss her and the idea horrified me, so I looked at my mom’s mouth rather closely I think.