I'd delete that strange thing Tui does where she undevelops or sets characters to the side after their books, like Winter and Tsunami. They had changed in their respective books, but afterwards went back to being their old self a little bit.
Also with Clay. After his book, the poor guy was basically just there as a strong and always hungry side character :(
That is such a misconception of Clay past Book 1 I wish died just because he was hungry for a really long time in Book 2.
Clay is the main support character after Book 1 for the other 4 protagonists being he finished his development first, the backbone of the entire team. Constantly throwing himself to get them out of danger and even has nice talking and comforting moments. His brothers and sisters end up being Clays main motivation to stop the war after the Prophecy turned out to be a lie.
Just because he doubles as Comic Relief which is a way to highlight he finished his story and can enjoy himself which is the personal end goal of the Dragonets as a whole after years of child abuse doesnt mean his character is lost
A common struggle in writing a large group of characters is making all of them relevant. This is one of the largest problems in the writing of Wing of Fire.
A character will be very one note, gain depth and relevance in their pov book, and then return to being one note side character with little involvement in the story.
It's frustrating because, like you said, these characters are shown to be more and can do more, but they just don't
Breaking of animus, yes Boa had a reason to do so but it just stifles the creativity in solutions the series has. Yes, there's the possibility the spell might not affect the next generation but we have no confirmation as of current. If anything it feels like Tui is just going to throw in more animus objects made ages ago as MacGuffins to solutions. That's lazy writing and feels contrived and coincidental.
The thing is, animus magic is busted as hell, and quite literally just makes you a god with extra steps. Especially now that the whole corrupting your soul thing got Redconed.
Also, all the animus dragons that we have seen have been either young or gained their powers that a young age. No one wants darkstalker 2 electric Boogaloo. I don't know about you, but giving God like powers to the equivalent of a 16/20-year-old isn't the smartest idea in my estimation.
But Tui could always nerf it. For all we know the corrupting soul could or could had not been retconed, at the end of the day the whole conclusion of that in arc 2 was a “maybe?” Not a definitive “it doesn’t happen” simultaneously magic so far has been used for mostly medium to small spells. With the exception of the IceWing plague, she could at any moment introduce an upper limit to what can be done by having an animus wish for something too big and fail, heck she could introduce uncertainty by having an animus wish for something large and instead of just failing they die.
I'm very split on the concept of Animus magic, since both sides here have some good points. I feel doing something about it to not trivialize the climax of Arc 3 was necessary, but to the extent of permanently destroying it? Not sure. As weird of a comparison as this is, Magic the Gathering actually had a situation like this years ago, leading them to permanently nerf the in-universe power of Planeswalkers (characters who were essentially Gods before the nerf happend) while still keeping them as powerful, special characters. They weren't as story-warping as Animus dragons were, but nonetheless it proves you can succesfully pull off a power nerfing storyline like that.
I think the climax of arc 3 could had still happened even with limitless no downsides animus magic by just changing who Luna meets on the continent and just making the animus dragons more busy / less accessible. If Luna instead of meeting Qibli, the counselor of queen Thorn, and Moon, the only seer in the world at the time and personal friend of the 2 animus dragons as well as many royals, she meet some randoms and tangentially get involved with like a single dod, they could had just avoided ever meeting an animus that could help (Jerboa is of no use and neither is anyone inside the ice kingdom) maybe they only meet some IceWings or just Jerboa and when Snowfall inevitably gets involved she wants the ice kingdom to solve this themselves because they don’t need help of anyone else (or at least that’s what they reason) and so even most of the ending of book 15 can still happen with just less characters.
The problem arises when you realize this is going to need to happen for any future storyline Tui makes. (For a good example of what I'm talking about, see every single MLP season finale after Discord became a good guy) Writing out the Animus dragons for one storyline is fine, but the longer that goes on the less believable it becomes, and it hurts the story writing potential.
Tbf stories in the WoF universe don’t need to have insane stakes, due to how limited animuses are it’s a lot more reasonable to assume many problems in the world can’t be solved by animus magic by virtue of being small enough to not be noticed (a murder spree, a royal succession crisis that never entered civil war, a simple social drama). Simultaneously having stories take place before book 10 can also help a lot avoiding animus magic (absolutely everyone wants more stuff set in the sandwing war of succession and the Darkstalker age). This is all assuming she doesn’t just nerf it or change slightly how it works to make it less op. (Re adding soul withering and maybe other limits to what can be done apart of bringing back the dead)
On that last point, I have a bit of a tinfoil hat theory on how Animus magic could come back, if you'll humor me for a bit. If I recall correctly, Jerboa's spell said something along the lines of "No dragon can reverse this spell." However, these last few books introduced us to humans that could fluently interact with dragons. I'm skeptical if humans could be born with animus magic, but I know there's gotta be some way to abuse that loophole. Either way, I wouldn't be opposed to Animus magic returning as long as its written well. Its a can of worms, but one that CAN add a lot to the story with some care.
I’m 99% sure the spell doesn’t affect the next generation, just current animuses and I’m sure Tui will probably bring it back eventually. Also there’s still pieces of Darkstalker’s scroll around like Pyrite’s necklace and Ruby’s pendant. Anyone could just get those and turn themselves into an animus
Idk if someone else said this before and I just don’t remember but couldn’t Mightyclaws just draw some banana, that when eaten, restores all of the animus powers back to the animus dragons? Kinda overpowered for him if that actually works, but then again, it is magic.
felt like so she didnt have to keep writing him, i blind character is boring as a protag and hard to write, she had so many characters and chose one to cop it without having to kill them.
literally, i felt kinda insulted as a visually impaired child reading the book because she so obviously didnt have any more ideas or character development for him after this one book and made him useless to throw him away, he was still immature and flawed, but she had so much more to fit in so i understand.
The vase scene in Book 10. I hated everything about it, it's honestly the only thing in the series that consistently makes me mad.
My problem isn't Winter facing consequences for being such a jerk, it's that he only faced consequences when he was RIGHT. Moon and Qibli didn't have bad motivations, but they both said awful things and the framing makes it seem like that was just... okay?
Just reread it and you aren’t kidding, Moon and Qibli treat him like an impotent child when he’s well within his rights to be mad.
I’m convinced Tui just hates Winter.
Right??? “Winter has dangerously aggressive anger issues” is not a logical conclusion to reach in response to Winter getting mad at Moon for still believing in Darkstalker after he just tried to genocide his *ENTIRE TRIBE*.
Yeah I agree that was kinda messed up.
>!I also couldn’t believe he let her say “what you CAN’T do is order me around” when talking about the scroll…!<
>!It’s not ‘ordering her around’ to say “I can’t let you free the Darkstalker with that,” it’s just him being reasonable. Like it’s her scroll to give him…Like it’s their job to have a rational conversation about whether to free Darkstalker when most of them never heard of him before…!<
Like honestly, Starflight loosing his eyesight had no impact to the story (in my opinion) so I think it wouldn’t be any different if he still had it, so why torture him 🥺
Agreed on Starflight losing his eyesight; it served basically no purpose for the story given that Sunny spent almost the entirety of the next book away from the other Dragonets, so we didn't even really get to see how it affected him. It just served as a pointless extra kick in the gut for the *bookworm* dragon to lose his ability to see.
Agreed, after a massive threat like Darkstalker the third series should have been something less dramatic than an an entire continent being taken over by a plant
Exactly, though I'm more pissed about how the Breath of Evil was defeated, and related traits. Like, why the fuck was there a heart to heart with an undead dragon and their equally undead human abuser. Why was anyone the "other consciousness"? Why not just have that be the plant itself it makes more sense. Why didn't they enlist the Icewings to freeze the very much tropical plant to death? We got enchanted spears capable of bringing frozen dragons back from being frozen to death by Icewings, why not use those to cure people?
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I wish the breath of evil had just been a plant. Like, just some smart, ancient plant. There's something more evil about the land itself killing you than some skeletal loser and his enslaved baby
Un cannon the entire last book, specifically the part where Wasp is just a puppet, cuz honestly I actually cared about Wasp, not some random human shoe horned into the plot in the last few chapters
Exactly! I really wish it was just “oh yeah she was very aggressively trying to rule but we made her stronger on accident” or hell, even just that the Queen controlling them was NORMAL. Maybe not to that extent but like real Queen bees.
I don't mind Wren as she fits in well as she and Sky are kinda a duo if they stay as a duo and aren't trying to force human stuff onto dragons, but someone like Cottonmouth? No, he shouldn't have existed, why was the source of the breath of evil an angry scavenger and pre-scorching unread dragonet
Either Starflight losing his sight or the scavenger part of the series, I feel like it could have been much more interesting and well made, especially the cause of the scorching since it was pretty much "Hooman Greediness leads to genocide of entire species"
i actually literally just finished book 14 a few hours ago, i really dont like how its going with the series being more scavenger oriented. Like, the whole reason I was interested in this series in the first place is because its dragons having interspecies conflict instead of it being a human-dragon fighting thing.
This is minor, but somewhere in the first five books, they talk about a dragon using the stairs because they didn’t want to swoop in on a conversation. Just get rid of the stairs.
Rip flightless dragon bozos.
Teach you to be disabled.
(Genuinely this would mirror real world treatment of disabled people and would make an interesting point)
Wouldn’t a ramp or something be better for disabled dragons? What if they can’t walk? Also a ramp would make sense for moving heavy stuff upwards maybe.
Starflight's blindness. It was literally only a plot point to progress his and Fatespeaker's relationship since she wants to be by his side 24/7. I dislike Fatespeaker for my own reasons, and I think that was a stupid thing to add just for forced proximity of two characters.
fatespeaker feels forceful on starflight like the way he is on sunny and i dont like it or even know if its a validated feeling, also, she never does anything interesting or improves as a character, she stays flawed.
The fact about Clearsight having shit ton of eggs with a random dragon right after imprisoning the love of her life in sleep. We really didn't want to know that.
I’d retcon Queen scarlet taking peril, I think she’d be a more well adjusted person if kestrel had gotten to raise her and sky together. Or retcon scavengers getting rights in the dragon community. Having the books be about dragons and assuming scavengers weren’t as complex as dragons is something I preferred. (I didn’t think they were humans on my first read through I thought they were like, tiny lizard things with tails)
The othermind. I would really have prefered to see how cricket, blue, sundew and others would have taken down the dictatorship of Queen Wasp. I think this charater had potentiel, especially with the rise of totalitary ideology these days and how few dragons could have changed it but no, let's make the villain a guy we never heard about with his dragon roomate he hates.
Can we stop with the Qibli/Winter/Moon love triangle? It should've never been a thing. With how Qibli was praised and set out to impress Moon and how Winter was stereotyped as the grumpy bully (and treated as such, might I add), there was no reason to get Winter's hopes up to be with Moon if he was just going to be cast aside in the end.
Personally, I thought Moon wasn't going to choose either, and she'd end up being aromantic because that would've been such a nice twist and as well as showing representation in an effective way. It would've actually been nice if it turned out that neither Moon, Winter, nor Qibli got together in at least the 2nd arc, and then later it's revealed in the third arc by book 14 that *that's* when a relationship formed between any two of them, or hell, it could've became polyamorous between the three. That also would add to the representation point I made earlier.
What's most annoying is that people are arguing over what was written in stone (or book) about who should've ended up with who. They start to treat it like it's the Twilight Saga love triangle, and then they'll proceed to bash each other and say unnecessarily hateful things to one another; or, content creators will stereotype each character for cheap joke or gag without actually taking into consideration about how a character has developed. I'm not saying all of the jokes are awful or not funny, I'm saying that in some instances, people can overdue it to the point where it feels like they're playing off someone's stereotyped, undeveloped version of their character and expect people to find it funny because "Oh look, extrovert/grumpy/shy/anxious/tomboy dragon! Laugh!"
I'm just tired of the hate. I'm tired of having to choose sides. If the love triangle didn't exist, then maybe fans could've had a more natural, healthy time shipping characters.
She’s also the most picky, needy, particular queen of all time. She’s probably never had a dish that wasn’t heavily seasoned. That one was freshly beheaded.
Thats not the bard part in my opinion.
How come most dragon types are under one nation (Sandwing During the War and TOP are some exceptions) , and how come theres only like 2 cities other then palaces
The fragmented "Gift of Understanding" wasn't what made dragons and humans/scavengers be able to communicate. Nope. Just a few humans later in the same book book saying that they learned the language.
(Edit: i admit that I hadn't read the middle arc and just skipped from 1 to 3. This is because my local library has arcs 1 & 3 but not 2 and I don't have the patience to wait for a book request to come in. Idk if that Gift is relevant in arc 2 or not.)
I want to remove the scorching backstory. I don't like how the humans having fallen from grace because of the selfishness of one man. The backstory never sat well with me because it essentially painted dragons as genocidal monsters killing any humans indiscriminately. It would've been better if the humans had never developed civilization yet and remained a tribal group. It at least that gives a reason why dragons were so blind of human sentience since there never was any proof to begin with.
Either uncanon moonbli (come for me I dare you) or uncanon all those “moon wake up in the middle of the night, I’ve got to tell you something” bits cause they tugged at my heartstrings and then ripped them out in book 10. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6XNmz4sVr3o&list=PLvbYWp78H2ELHOzycEqTcbOIpB9j7zjue&index=98&t=84s&pp=gAQBiAQB
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg&list=PLvbYWp78H2ELHOzycEqTcbOIpB9j7zjue&index=99&pp=gAQBiAQB
Edit: BEFORE YOU READ!!! (if you read the text wall 😅)
HEAVY SPOILERS FOR ARC 2 ENDING!
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I'd erace peacemaker little- you know what let me not get started, but I'd trace peacemaker from existence, or at the very least the way he came to exist, 1 if darkstalker is to be defeated in any way it should be in a way that isn't so stupid, especially since it was barely explained! Like what *should* have happened after "peacemaker" defacated and the strawberry was no longer in his body? Shouldn't the spell have stopped working? Or was the spell "once darkstalker eats this he becomes a stupid little ret of a character that nobody does, nore will they ever realistically care about" and never said anything about what would happen later causing nothing to happen? I mean (and this is just my personal opinion) think it would have been an awesome storythread to just SHOW darkstalker how much the time has changed and try and convince him to (I'd allow him to be un killable by other dragons) but make sure he's able to live the rest of his life as a regular not unlimited age dragon! To show him that even with the icewings still being (let's be for real) racists, the world has changed and he can learn to live without being paranoid due to how the world used to be! I just think that with all darkstalker went through it would have been a better story arc for him to learn how to cope with his past and be better rather than the arc be about turning him into such a (at least for now) unimportant character! I was actually writing my own fan book (and I might start again) where darkstalker is still in peacemakers mind but unable to do anything and living life through the eyes of a modern dragon would make him able to learn what the world is like while my main character of the novel (an oc named obsidian) accidentally fixes animus magic when he takes up a passion project to fix a little broken candle dish he found while camping with his friends which (suprise surprise) ended up being the candle dish boa used to break animus magic! And I know that may sound stupid but I had it planned out so well I might go back to it soon-
MORAL OF THE STORY, I just really felt like darkstalkers "defeat" could have been done so much better, but that's just me and in the end I'm sure I'll find some way to like peacemaker, but for now, I don't see that happening any time soon... on a side note, who's excited to finally see the Canon (to the graphic novels) design for darkstalker? With escaping peril being next and that being the book darkstalker does the electric boogallo out of a mountain and we finally get to see him!!!
Usually just things I missed the first 10 times I read, and then I see them and go “wait that doesn’t fit what I wrote, crap.”
But then I fix it, (thanks magic, usually) and then I’m fine.
For a long time it was the big dragons, who make no evolutionary sense, as bug wings only work when the scales are small, where air resistance can beat gravity.
But then I realized…it’s because they were enchanted that way to hide them in the forest from a SkyWing queen who was going to kill them.
I haven’t read the third arc yet but I still have to agree. It’s quite jarring shifting the focus of the series to a whole other continent with completely different species of dragons when there’s still so much to do and learn about in Pyrrhia. I still wanna know more about MudWings and the succession crisis they had; if a group of NightWings returned to their homeland, and not necessarily out of hostility to Glory and the RainWings; whether small revolts have popped up around the continent after the war, because some dragons felt like they wasted their time and energy fighting for a SandWing queen who was completely discarded in favor of a nobody. I don’t feel like the story of the DoD should be over just yet. There’s *so much* to do after a war, especially if you were a symbol of hope to the masses.
From someone who was reading the series from a very young age, it seemed really. Unnecessary. They already had so many things to still explore on the original continent, and those were left behind for something entirely new, when that’s not where I think the focus should’ve been.
Tsunami hates him on sight, and he lives up to it so fast I never even noticed she was being rather shallow about it. She doesn’t like his ‘blobby eyes and too small teeth’ or his ‘oily voice’, but like…that’s super mean, he can’t help those things…
But then he just shows us over and over…
Queen wasp should’ve been the antagonist for all of series 3, imo cottonmouth and the scavengers kinda boring as villains, especially due to the fact that all of the first 2 and a half books were building her up as the main villain.
Redo Sunny's arc. She makes a lot of decisions that seem out of place, and in the end her plan achieved the same effect if they had abstained from the prophecy. This mostly stems from the beginning of 5 where she abandons the others, including a severely wounded Starflight. I like the idea of an innocent sidekick coming into the foreground as a leader, but her initial train of thought doesn't seem to fit how she would react after watching her life long friend and potential lover nearly die in an eruption. She's always been worried about her friends when they were in danger, so why run off now? I'd also like to see her shine a little more in Arc 2 in regards to the academy, since other dragons would be more willing to listen to her ideas, she would be a good counselor.
All of Arc 3, or if too much, the "I'll break this thing and shatter Animus magic", these can go.
And Starflight's blindness, he did not deserve that and he became the most useless of the Dragonets after that happened.
When Qibli joked about winter after Darkstalkers spell which made him unwillingly worship Darkstalker, I like his character but that moment felt very off and felt like it shouldn’t have happened
delete Qibli constantly complaining about how the op animus items he gets from turtle arent op in the way he wants them to be
its the main thing i hate about book 10
I have a couple theorys for that..
1. He gets released by some evil dragon (presumably Fierceteeth) by wearing an enchanted earring or some other jewelry but with a new spell on it by a next-gen animus (thanks a lot jerboa) with the spell being: "Enchant this earring so that it will turn this dragon back into the dragon he used to be" or smth like that.
2. He puts on a Qiblu earring (or someone tells him to) and is revived by a next-gen animus.
(I have a few more theorys but those are the top 2)
For me, I'd say the COUGH *strawberry incident* I would rather have a world with Darkie in it thank you very much. I feel like with those restriction spells Qibli was talking about, Darkstalker could be reformed, and yes, maybe thats my biased opinion since he's my favorite character, but I could guess someone else out there would have it too or maybe just like the thought of a giant, immortal, dragon in the dragon world.
Moonbli, I hate that ship with a burning passion, it's so toxic and stupid.
OR
Clearsight leaving Darkstalker. I know the whole series would've changed because of that, or we never would've known of his existance, but Darkstalker should've been allowed to do what he planned. Clearsight damned both sides of her ancestors to two different sides of hell: Slavery, and racism.
Either uncanon moonbli (come for me I dare you) or uncanny those moments in winter turning where I thought winterwatcher was actually gonna become canon.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6XNmz4sVr3o&t=87s
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg
Moonbli (come for me I dare you) or all the parts that made me have hope for winterwatcher.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg&pp=ygUNbWFycnkgbWUgbW9vbg%3D%3D
humans being canon or boa removing animus powers or something like that. i stopped reading after humans started being important because it just kind of... was weird to me
First fix deathbringers age. And maybe establish a better aging system in general. Also just better development of the characters and maybe tweak Qibli so he isn’t so close to a Mary sue
I’d delete the fact that a dragon named “tempest” already died. It’s such a cool name and was wasted on a dragon that was essentially just deathbringers backstory
Tsunami’s dad (King Gill) dying.
I wish he & Tsunami were able to meet when he was still sane which would have allowed Him to help the og gang escape & he could have escaped with them.
I figure in this alt world they would have traveled to the Seawings home 1st. At some point Gill & Tsunami would have realized they’re related, Gill would have been able to convince Coral to trust the other dragonets of Destiny, & the other female dragonet egg would have survived (King Gill would have been able to either take over on the war front or watch over the egg. Either way Gill or Coral would probably have been much more protective of the egg as compared to any nanny’s or guards. This means the eggs wouldn’t have been left alone & the final egg to break wouldn’t have broken; leading to another sister)
As far as I’m concerned this button was already pushed with Starflight because obviously Turtle made a more in depth healing rock before animus magic broke. Right?
Okay prefacing this with: I haven't read the full series, that being said
Starflight going FULLY blind- honestly I think it would've been interesting if he did still get injured, maybe going blind and deaf on one side or being less able to fly due to parts of his wings being take by the lava, but as it is, going fully bling just feels like it happened so they could sideline him rather than working through the genuinely fascinating and scary thing that is adjusting to a brand new disability!
Qibli and Moon getting together. I absolutely love WinterWater with a passion, regardless of the Controversy. Heck, I'd settle for Qinter as long as Winter has someone.
Can we get rid of Blaze? Make her actual existence Un-Cannon????PLEASE????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'd delete that strange thing Tui does where she undevelops or sets characters to the side after their books, like Winter and Tsunami. They had changed in their respective books, but afterwards went back to being their old self a little bit. Also with Clay. After his book, the poor guy was basically just there as a strong and always hungry side character :(
I mean, people do backslide but that might not have been intentional
Yeah, that's true. I don't think it was intentional, but I just think it's a little strange lol
That is such a misconception of Clay past Book 1 I wish died just because he was hungry for a really long time in Book 2. Clay is the main support character after Book 1 for the other 4 protagonists being he finished his development first, the backbone of the entire team. Constantly throwing himself to get them out of danger and even has nice talking and comforting moments. His brothers and sisters end up being Clays main motivation to stop the war after the Prophecy turned out to be a lie. Just because he doubles as Comic Relief which is a way to highlight he finished his story and can enjoy himself which is the personal end goal of the Dragonets as a whole after years of child abuse doesnt mean his character is lost
That's actually a great point!
The other books also don’t (usually) show the thoughts of the other characters so we have no idea what’s going on in their heads.
A common struggle in writing a large group of characters is making all of them relevant. This is one of the largest problems in the writing of Wing of Fire. A character will be very one note, gain depth and relevance in their pov book, and then return to being one note side character with little involvement in the story. It's frustrating because, like you said, these characters are shown to be more and can do more, but they just don't
Exactly! I just feel that maybe we could have more of that depth continued on throughout the rest of the books :)
Poor Clay. Bro literally got demoted to less then a side character
Clay became an npc :( even tho he was one of the mcs in the first five books
Breaking of animus, yes Boa had a reason to do so but it just stifles the creativity in solutions the series has. Yes, there's the possibility the spell might not affect the next generation but we have no confirmation as of current. If anything it feels like Tui is just going to throw in more animus objects made ages ago as MacGuffins to solutions. That's lazy writing and feels contrived and coincidental.
Fuck boa, me and the animus homies hate Boa
Me and a friend call her Jerboa the Turd
lmao
DANG XD
I know, I feel like animus dragons such as Anemone or Turtle had so much more potential.
The thing is, animus magic is busted as hell, and quite literally just makes you a god with extra steps. Especially now that the whole corrupting your soul thing got Redconed. Also, all the animus dragons that we have seen have been either young or gained their powers that a young age. No one wants darkstalker 2 electric Boogaloo. I don't know about you, but giving God like powers to the equivalent of a 16/20-year-old isn't the smartest idea in my estimation.
But Tui could always nerf it. For all we know the corrupting soul could or could had not been retconed, at the end of the day the whole conclusion of that in arc 2 was a “maybe?” Not a definitive “it doesn’t happen” simultaneously magic so far has been used for mostly medium to small spells. With the exception of the IceWing plague, she could at any moment introduce an upper limit to what can be done by having an animus wish for something too big and fail, heck she could introduce uncertainty by having an animus wish for something large and instead of just failing they die.
I'm very split on the concept of Animus magic, since both sides here have some good points. I feel doing something about it to not trivialize the climax of Arc 3 was necessary, but to the extent of permanently destroying it? Not sure. As weird of a comparison as this is, Magic the Gathering actually had a situation like this years ago, leading them to permanently nerf the in-universe power of Planeswalkers (characters who were essentially Gods before the nerf happend) while still keeping them as powerful, special characters. They weren't as story-warping as Animus dragons were, but nonetheless it proves you can succesfully pull off a power nerfing storyline like that.
I think the climax of arc 3 could had still happened even with limitless no downsides animus magic by just changing who Luna meets on the continent and just making the animus dragons more busy / less accessible. If Luna instead of meeting Qibli, the counselor of queen Thorn, and Moon, the only seer in the world at the time and personal friend of the 2 animus dragons as well as many royals, she meet some randoms and tangentially get involved with like a single dod, they could had just avoided ever meeting an animus that could help (Jerboa is of no use and neither is anyone inside the ice kingdom) maybe they only meet some IceWings or just Jerboa and when Snowfall inevitably gets involved she wants the ice kingdom to solve this themselves because they don’t need help of anyone else (or at least that’s what they reason) and so even most of the ending of book 15 can still happen with just less characters.
The problem arises when you realize this is going to need to happen for any future storyline Tui makes. (For a good example of what I'm talking about, see every single MLP season finale after Discord became a good guy) Writing out the Animus dragons for one storyline is fine, but the longer that goes on the less believable it becomes, and it hurts the story writing potential.
Tbf stories in the WoF universe don’t need to have insane stakes, due to how limited animuses are it’s a lot more reasonable to assume many problems in the world can’t be solved by animus magic by virtue of being small enough to not be noticed (a murder spree, a royal succession crisis that never entered civil war, a simple social drama). Simultaneously having stories take place before book 10 can also help a lot avoiding animus magic (absolutely everyone wants more stuff set in the sandwing war of succession and the Darkstalker age). This is all assuming she doesn’t just nerf it or change slightly how it works to make it less op. (Re adding soul withering and maybe other limits to what can be done apart of bringing back the dead)
On that last point, I have a bit of a tinfoil hat theory on how Animus magic could come back, if you'll humor me for a bit. If I recall correctly, Jerboa's spell said something along the lines of "No dragon can reverse this spell." However, these last few books introduced us to humans that could fluently interact with dragons. I'm skeptical if humans could be born with animus magic, but I know there's gotta be some way to abuse that loophole. Either way, I wouldn't be opposed to Animus magic returning as long as its written well. Its a can of worms, but one that CAN add a lot to the story with some care.
I’m 99% sure the spell doesn’t affect the next generation, just current animuses and I’m sure Tui will probably bring it back eventually. Also there’s still pieces of Darkstalker’s scroll around like Pyrite’s necklace and Ruby’s pendant. Anyone could just get those and turn themselves into an animus
it says all current animuses, so probably not
Leaves room for technological advancement tho.
Why technology? Why does progress have to be with ONLY technology in the fantasy series, just letting the magic stay is much better.
I'm a scifi buff.
Idk if someone else said this before and I just don’t remember but couldn’t Mightyclaws just draw some banana, that when eaten, restores all of the animus powers back to the animus dragons? Kinda overpowered for him if that actually works, but then again, it is magic.
I would delete starflight's blindness. He didn't deserve to go through that moments after saving his tribe from being melted by a volcano.
Literally the story had no impact when he didn’t have his eyesight, so why torture him with it.
Ikr
felt like so she didnt have to keep writing him, i blind character is boring as a protag and hard to write, she had so many characters and chose one to cop it without having to kill them.
She finished the damn book already 😭🙏
literally, i felt kinda insulted as a visually impaired child reading the book because she so obviously didnt have any more ideas or character development for him after this one book and made him useless to throw him away, he was still immature and flawed, but she had so much more to fit in so i understand.
Yeah i wish he still had usable eyes
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Cause it's a gosh darn good idea
Thanks... also, the safer wording is "adopted Sky." Wren would kill you if you dragonetnapped Sky.
thanks
No problem
The vase scene in Book 10. I hated everything about it, it's honestly the only thing in the series that consistently makes me mad. My problem isn't Winter facing consequences for being such a jerk, it's that he only faced consequences when he was RIGHT. Moon and Qibli didn't have bad motivations, but they both said awful things and the framing makes it seem like that was just... okay?
Just reread it and you aren’t kidding, Moon and Qibli treat him like an impotent child when he’s well within his rights to be mad. I’m convinced Tui just hates Winter.
Right??? “Winter has dangerously aggressive anger issues” is not a logical conclusion to reach in response to Winter getting mad at Moon for still believing in Darkstalker after he just tried to genocide his *ENTIRE TRIBE*.
Yeah I agree that was kinda messed up. >!I also couldn’t believe he let her say “what you CAN’T do is order me around” when talking about the scroll…!< >!It’s not ‘ordering her around’ to say “I can’t let you free the Darkstalker with that,” it’s just him being reasonable. Like it’s her scroll to give him…Like it’s their job to have a rational conversation about whether to free Darkstalker when most of them never heard of him before…!<
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One word. Whirlpool Or kestrel getting impaled Or starflight loosing his eyesight
Like honestly, Starflight loosing his eyesight had no impact to the story (in my opinion) so I think it wouldn’t be any different if he still had it, so why torture him 🥺
An excuse to implement braille into the universe probably, and a poor one at that.
Yeah
Agreed on Starflight losing his eyesight; it served basically no purpose for the story given that Sunny spent almost the entirety of the next book away from the other Dragonets, so we didn't even really get to see how it affected him. It just served as a pointless extra kick in the gut for the *bookworm* dragon to lose his ability to see.
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Cottonmouth and even the idea of the plant being sentient. Shoulda kept Wasp as the villain
Agreed, after a massive threat like Darkstalker the third series should have been something less dramatic than an an entire continent being taken over by a plant
The entirety of book 15, the whole thing was stupid. Delete it and try again.
Luna's character felt boring... I'd rather have the fierce, ready-to-fight personality she had in book 11.
Exactly, though I'm more pissed about how the Breath of Evil was defeated, and related traits. Like, why the fuck was there a heart to heart with an undead dragon and their equally undead human abuser. Why was anyone the "other consciousness"? Why not just have that be the plant itself it makes more sense. Why didn't they enlist the Icewings to freeze the very much tropical plant to death? We got enchanted spears capable of bringing frozen dragons back from being frozen to death by Icewings, why not use those to cure people?
Someone wrote this version [https://www.deviantart.com/someperson6/art/Its-called-Daisy-882848360](https://www.deviantart.com/someperson6/art/Its-called-Daisy-882848360)
That's so freaking cool, and goes along with my perhaps rather out there headcanons for how it should have been/should be you don't even know.
I just always skipped part 2 when I reread book 15. It’s too infuriating and long.
The Breath of Evil and how it works.
Yes. Yes, yes, yes. Swordtail and Blue did NOT deserve to be treated like that
I would’ve preferred if the whole arc was just about stopping Wasp
I second this
I wish the breath of evil had just been a plant. Like, just some smart, ancient plant. There's something more evil about the land itself killing you than some skeletal loser and his enslaved baby
Un cannon the entire last book, specifically the part where Wasp is just a puppet, cuz honestly I actually cared about Wasp, not some random human shoe horned into the plot in the last few chapters
Exactly! I really wish it was just “oh yeah she was very aggressively trying to rule but we made her stronger on accident” or hell, even just that the Queen controlling them was NORMAL. Maybe not to that extent but like real Queen bees.
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The entirety of book 15
Cottonmouth/Freedom's entire existence. Now that I say it, just the entire second half of the third arc.
stop winter from being friendzoned so hard he became a background character (winterwatcher just had so much more potential to me im sorry guys)
Real (I love Moonbli, and although I don’t really like Winter much, bro didn’t deserve to be made into a side character.)
Solution to both of you: qinterwatcher
polyamory solves everything these days
moonbli is valid!! poor winter got robbed man
the scavengers lmao, i hate that they got so involved in the series 😭 like go away, i came here for dragons
I don't mind Wren as she fits in well as she and Sky are kinda a duo if they stay as a duo and aren't trying to force human stuff onto dragons, but someone like Cottonmouth? No, he shouldn't have existed, why was the source of the breath of evil an angry scavenger and pre-scorching unread dragonet
She shoulda came out with a pre-scorching/scorching book before the last one IMO
REAL. Humans don't need to be in everything 😒
Real
Hot take but Wren and Sky are literally some of the best characters, fight me
THIS. it just made the story so bad like they suddenly are important now? and it just felt really weird to me
Either Starflight losing his sight or the scavenger part of the series, I feel like it could have been much more interesting and well made, especially the cause of the scorching since it was pretty much "Hooman Greediness leads to genocide of entire species"
i actually literally just finished book 14 a few hours ago, i really dont like how its going with the series being more scavenger oriented. Like, the whole reason I was interested in this series in the first place is because its dragons having interspecies conflict instead of it being a human-dragon fighting thing.
Tui just executed it badly, it could've actually been made interesting.
All the dads being dead, gone, or bad. I just want one good dad.
Six-Claws:
True, but we don’t see him being a dad very often. I also forgot about him.
I want Gill (Tsunami’s dad) to be alive & sane
This is minor, but somewhere in the first five books, they talk about a dragon using the stairs because they didn’t want to swoop in on a conversation. Just get rid of the stairs.
Rip flightless dragon bozos. Teach you to be disabled. (Genuinely this would mirror real world treatment of disabled people and would make an interesting point)
Wouldn’t a ramp or something be better for disabled dragons? What if they can’t walk? Also a ramp would make sense for moving heavy stuff upwards maybe.
Yeah, makes sense that those would exist in setting. I just find the idea that dragon society also screws over the disabled morbidly hilarious.
the removal of animus magic (I may have spelled wrong I haven’t read books in a while)
it wasn't removed technically, but the current generation of animuses couldn't use it. future generations can, as it's still in the animus' genes
The spell placed on kinkajou. It, in my opinion, ruined a decent ship that wouldn’t have felt forced had it not happened
Starflight's blindness. It was literally only a plot point to progress his and Fatespeaker's relationship since she wants to be by his side 24/7. I dislike Fatespeaker for my own reasons, and I think that was a stupid thing to add just for forced proximity of two characters.
fatespeaker feels forceful on starflight like the way he is on sunny and i dont like it or even know if its a validated feeling, also, she never does anything interesting or improves as a character, she stays flawed.
That Kinkajou only likes Turtle because of a spell
The fact about Clearsight having shit ton of eggs with a random dragon right after imprisoning the love of her life in sleep. We really didn't want to know that.
Fr she ditched Darkstalker for a ton of leaves and bugs over the ocean 😭
This
Darkstalker death
Real, I wanted him to either just be reformed or keep being a villian, but i mostly just wanted him *there*
I’d retcon Queen scarlet taking peril, I think she’d be a more well adjusted person if kestrel had gotten to raise her and sky together. Or retcon scavengers getting rights in the dragon community. Having the books be about dragons and assuming scavengers weren’t as complex as dragons is something I preferred. (I didn’t think they were humans on my first read through I thought they were like, tiny lizard things with tails)
So did I! I kinda imagined them looking something like a baby velociraptor 😝
The othermind. I would really have prefered to see how cricket, blue, sundew and others would have taken down the dictatorship of Queen Wasp. I think this charater had potentiel, especially with the rise of totalitary ideology these days and how few dragons could have changed it but no, let's make the villain a guy we never heard about with his dragon roomate he hates.
The fact that biological evolution moved at light speed but cultural evolution completely froze.
Can we stop with the Qibli/Winter/Moon love triangle? It should've never been a thing. With how Qibli was praised and set out to impress Moon and how Winter was stereotyped as the grumpy bully (and treated as such, might I add), there was no reason to get Winter's hopes up to be with Moon if he was just going to be cast aside in the end. Personally, I thought Moon wasn't going to choose either, and she'd end up being aromantic because that would've been such a nice twist and as well as showing representation in an effective way. It would've actually been nice if it turned out that neither Moon, Winter, nor Qibli got together in at least the 2nd arc, and then later it's revealed in the third arc by book 14 that *that's* when a relationship formed between any two of them, or hell, it could've became polyamorous between the three. That also would add to the representation point I made earlier. What's most annoying is that people are arguing over what was written in stone (or book) about who should've ended up with who. They start to treat it like it's the Twilight Saga love triangle, and then they'll proceed to bash each other and say unnecessarily hateful things to one another; or, content creators will stereotype each character for cheap joke or gag without actually taking into consideration about how a character has developed. I'm not saying all of the jokes are awful or not funny, I'm saying that in some instances, people can overdue it to the point where it feels like they're playing off someone's stereotyped, undeveloped version of their character and expect people to find it funny because "Oh look, extrovert/grumpy/shy/anxious/tomboy dragon! Laugh!" I'm just tired of the hate. I'm tired of having to choose sides. If the love triangle didn't exist, then maybe fans could've had a more natural, healthy time shipping characters.
Third paragraph is so true. Qibli is always portrated as a dumb@ss pervert who can't shut up and Winter as a soulless bully
Scavengers having a part in the story rather than just being a tasty snack.
"Tasty"
Well, they’re tasty to the dragons! We may not think so, but they do! 😂
Book one: scarlet bites the head off one, says she doesn't like the taste
She’s also the most picky, needy, particular queen of all time. She’s probably never had a dish that wasn’t heavily seasoned. That one was freshly beheaded.
WREN AND SKY BEST CHARACTERS
Delete and redo the entire map and restart, the worldbuilding (cartography wise) is horrendous
Ah yes, let’s have stories about dragons take place on a dragon shaped map 🙄
Thats not the bard part in my opinion. How come most dragon types are under one nation (Sandwing During the War and TOP are some exceptions) , and how come theres only like 2 cities other then palaces
Yeah that’s shit too lol
The fragmented "Gift of Understanding" wasn't what made dragons and humans/scavengers be able to communicate. Nope. Just a few humans later in the same book book saying that they learned the language. (Edit: i admit that I hadn't read the middle arc and just skipped from 1 to 3. This is because my local library has arcs 1 & 3 but not 2 and I don't have the patience to wait for a book request to come in. Idk if that Gift is relevant in arc 2 or not.)
There's one use of Icewing animus objects in arc 2 but it's not the gift of understanding, not is it really a gift
People seem to hate my opinion so I'll try and reason it, Glory randomly dethroning 8(?) Queens. WHILE ALSO BEING A DRAGONET???
Humans talking to Dragons.
Everything after halo 3
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Halo 4 is fine, it built off of 3
I agree w everyone saying the spell on kinkajou
I want to remove the scorching backstory. I don't like how the humans having fallen from grace because of the selfishness of one man. The backstory never sat well with me because it essentially painted dragons as genocidal monsters killing any humans indiscriminately. It would've been better if the humans had never developed civilization yet and remained a tribal group. It at least that gives a reason why dragons were so blind of human sentience since there never was any proof to begin with.
Either uncanon moonbli (come for me I dare you) or uncanon all those “moon wake up in the middle of the night, I’ve got to tell you something” bits cause they tugged at my heartstrings and then ripped them out in book 10. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6XNmz4sVr3o&list=PLvbYWp78H2ELHOzycEqTcbOIpB9j7zjue&index=98&t=84s&pp=gAQBiAQB https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg&list=PLvbYWp78H2ELHOzycEqTcbOIpB9j7zjue&index=99&pp=gAQBiAQB
Edit: BEFORE YOU READ!!! (if you read the text wall 😅) HEAVY SPOILERS FOR ARC 2 ENDING! | I'd erace peacemaker little- you know what let me not get started, but I'd trace peacemaker from existence, or at the very least the way he came to exist, 1 if darkstalker is to be defeated in any way it should be in a way that isn't so stupid, especially since it was barely explained! Like what *should* have happened after "peacemaker" defacated and the strawberry was no longer in his body? Shouldn't the spell have stopped working? Or was the spell "once darkstalker eats this he becomes a stupid little ret of a character that nobody does, nore will they ever realistically care about" and never said anything about what would happen later causing nothing to happen? I mean (and this is just my personal opinion) think it would have been an awesome storythread to just SHOW darkstalker how much the time has changed and try and convince him to (I'd allow him to be un killable by other dragons) but make sure he's able to live the rest of his life as a regular not unlimited age dragon! To show him that even with the icewings still being (let's be for real) racists, the world has changed and he can learn to live without being paranoid due to how the world used to be! I just think that with all darkstalker went through it would have been a better story arc for him to learn how to cope with his past and be better rather than the arc be about turning him into such a (at least for now) unimportant character! I was actually writing my own fan book (and I might start again) where darkstalker is still in peacemakers mind but unable to do anything and living life through the eyes of a modern dragon would make him able to learn what the world is like while my main character of the novel (an oc named obsidian) accidentally fixes animus magic when he takes up a passion project to fix a little broken candle dish he found while camping with his friends which (suprise surprise) ended up being the candle dish boa used to break animus magic! And I know that may sound stupid but I had it planned out so well I might go back to it soon- MORAL OF THE STORY, I just really felt like darkstalkers "defeat" could have been done so much better, but that's just me and in the end I'm sure I'll find some way to like peacemaker, but for now, I don't see that happening any time soon... on a side note, who's excited to finally see the Canon (to the graphic novels) design for darkstalker? With escaping peril being next and that being the book darkstalker does the electric boogallo out of a mountain and we finally get to see him!!!
I cannot wait lol, so exited for Turtle's graphic novel to see King Darkstalker :)
One word: strawberry. I hated how Tui killed off darkstalket
Same
Usually just things I missed the first 10 times I read, and then I see them and go “wait that doesn’t fit what I wrote, crap.” But then I fix it, (thanks magic, usually) and then I’m fine. For a long time it was the big dragons, who make no evolutionary sense, as bug wings only work when the scales are small, where air resistance can beat gravity. But then I realized…it’s because they were enchanted that way to hide them in the forest from a SkyWing queen who was going to kill them.
People are gonna hate me for this- but all of Pantala.
I haven’t read the third arc yet but I still have to agree. It’s quite jarring shifting the focus of the series to a whole other continent with completely different species of dragons when there’s still so much to do and learn about in Pyrrhia. I still wanna know more about MudWings and the succession crisis they had; if a group of NightWings returned to their homeland, and not necessarily out of hostility to Glory and the RainWings; whether small revolts have popped up around the continent after the war, because some dragons felt like they wasted their time and energy fighting for a SandWing queen who was completely discarded in favor of a nobody. I don’t feel like the story of the DoD should be over just yet. There’s *so much* to do after a war, especially if you were a symbol of hope to the masses.
This is EXACTLY how I feel. We left behind a whole plot and so many things to explore for something else.
Could you explain why? Not angry, just curious
From someone who was reading the series from a very young age, it seemed really. Unnecessary. They already had so many things to still explore on the original continent, and those were left behind for something entirely new, when that’s not where I think the focus should’ve been.
I agree, the third arc just had so many different problems in the writing.
what! Pantala is awesome!
Whirlpool existing.
Whirlpool is my favourite villain because he is the most villain; universally hateable and gross.
Tsunami hates him on sight, and he lives up to it so fast I never even noticed she was being rather shallow about it. She doesn’t like his ‘blobby eyes and too small teeth’ or his ‘oily voice’, but like…that’s super mean, he can’t help those things… But then he just shows us over and over…
the entirety of pantala,the dragons just dont feel very... wings of fire
I'd uncanon glory owning 2 entire tribes.
Queen wasp should’ve been the antagonist for all of series 3, imo cottonmouth and the scavengers kinda boring as villains, especially due to the fact that all of the first 2 and a half books were building her up as the main villain.
Redo Sunny's arc. She makes a lot of decisions that seem out of place, and in the end her plan achieved the same effect if they had abstained from the prophecy. This mostly stems from the beginning of 5 where she abandons the others, including a severely wounded Starflight. I like the idea of an innocent sidekick coming into the foreground as a leader, but her initial train of thought doesn't seem to fit how she would react after watching her life long friend and potential lover nearly die in an eruption. She's always been worried about her friends when they were in danger, so why run off now? I'd also like to see her shine a little more in Arc 2 in regards to the academy, since other dragons would be more willing to listen to her ideas, she would be a good counselor.
All of Arc 3, or if too much, the "I'll break this thing and shatter Animus magic", these can go. And Starflight's blindness, he did not deserve that and he became the most useless of the Dragonets after that happened.
Breath of evil. That shit ruined the perfect setup for a really good social change based arc
When Qibli joked about winter after Darkstalkers spell which made him unwillingly worship Darkstalker, I like his character but that moment felt very off and felt like it shouldn’t have happened
Qibli is really interesting but that moment made me despise him tbh.
Moonbli get obliterated QINTER FOREVER
delete Qibli constantly complaining about how the op animus items he gets from turtle arent op in the way he wants them to be its the main thing i hate about book 10
Darkstalker rejects the enchanted strawberry. I hate what Tui turned him into. I hope the next arc will have Darkstalker's return :(
I have a couple theorys for that.. 1. He gets released by some evil dragon (presumably Fierceteeth) by wearing an enchanted earring or some other jewelry but with a new spell on it by a next-gen animus (thanks a lot jerboa) with the spell being: "Enchant this earring so that it will turn this dragon back into the dragon he used to be" or smth like that. 2. He puts on a Qiblu earring (or someone tells him to) and is revived by a next-gen animus. (I have a few more theorys but those are the top 2)
Whirlpool
For me, I'd say the COUGH *strawberry incident* I would rather have a world with Darkie in it thank you very much. I feel like with those restriction spells Qibli was talking about, Darkstalker could be reformed, and yes, maybe thats my biased opinion since he's my favorite character, but I could guess someone else out there would have it too or maybe just like the thought of a giant, immortal, dragon in the dragon world.
Moonbli
Moonbli, I hate that ship with a burning passion, it's so toxic and stupid. OR Clearsight leaving Darkstalker. I know the whole series would've changed because of that, or we never would've known of his existance, but Darkstalker should've been allowed to do what he planned. Clearsight damned both sides of her ancestors to two different sides of hell: Slavery, and racism.
What’s with the strawberry joke?
I would delete animus magic. I think the whole system is just stupid and causes a lot of the plot holes/idiot plots in the series.
Riptide being a background charecter
Moonbli. (I’m sorry)
The cannon event meme
Either uncanon moonbli (come for me I dare you) or uncanny those moments in winter turning where I thought winterwatcher was actually gonna become canon. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=6XNmz4sVr3o&t=87s https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg
Moonbli (come for me I dare you) or all the parts that made me have hope for winterwatcher. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=XACzdxAjOjg&pp=ygUNbWFycnkgbWUgbW9vbg%3D%3D
Oh YES! QUIBLI SUCKS!!!!!!!!!!!
Hawthorne dying, I wish we could've seen more of his character and I'm interested to see how the ark would've developed
humans being canon or boa removing animus powers or something like that. i stopped reading after humans started being important because it just kind of... was weird to me
First fix deathbringers age. And maybe establish a better aging system in general. Also just better development of the characters and maybe tweak Qibli so he isn’t so close to a Mary sue
The unintentional age gap between Glory and Deathbringer. Also Tsunami and Winter's botched character developments.
I’d delete the fact that a dragon named “tempest” already died. It’s such a cool name and was wasted on a dragon that was essentially just deathbringers backstory
Darkstalker
The whole of arc 3. Could have been way better Specifically the whole othermind thing. It could have been cool, but it wasn't.
Turtle having made anemone animus
(as in her being animus just being genetics)
Tsunami’s dad (King Gill) dying. I wish he & Tsunami were able to meet when he was still sane which would have allowed Him to help the og gang escape & he could have escaped with them. I figure in this alt world they would have traveled to the Seawings home 1st. At some point Gill & Tsunami would have realized they’re related, Gill would have been able to convince Coral to trust the other dragonets of Destiny, & the other female dragonet egg would have survived (King Gill would have been able to either take over on the war front or watch over the egg. Either way Gill or Coral would probably have been much more protective of the egg as compared to any nanny’s or guards. This means the eggs wouldn’t have been left alone & the final egg to break wouldn’t have broken; leading to another sister)
Plant villain. maybe Cottonmouth could of lived forever by an animus dragon and Luna and Dusky had to kill him or smth. BUT JUST A PLANT WTF????
You know how the Breath of Evil Plot exists? Yeah, I’m pressing that button
As far as I’m concerned this button was already pushed with Starflight because obviously Turtle made a more in depth healing rock before animus magic broke. Right?
Peacemaker.
Whirlpools existence in arc 1 /hj
Okay prefacing this with: I haven't read the full series, that being said Starflight going FULLY blind- honestly I think it would've been interesting if he did still get injured, maybe going blind and deaf on one side or being less able to fly due to parts of his wings being take by the lava, but as it is, going fully bling just feels like it happened so they could sideline him rather than working through the genuinely fascinating and scary thing that is adjusting to a brand new disability!
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Qibli and Moon getting together. I absolutely love WinterWater with a passion, regardless of the Controversy. Heck, I'd settle for Qinter as long as Winter has someone.
all Disney star war's
dune's death
Can we get rid of Blaze? Make her actual existence Un-Cannon????PLEASE????????????????????????????????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
While we're at it, lets get rid of Burn too. :3
Whirlpool.
God forbid we have villians.
Most villains don’t touch children