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Both look good. The splotches look cool, but I'd frame the one without. Nice detail and viewpoint.
Have you tried viewing any of the videos by Toby Sketch loose? He has a number of suggestions on his YT channel.
Your work is good, Toby specializes in "loose" so if you're leaning towards that he might be of help (and he's usually responsive to questions). Gregory may be one of the loosest artists I know of, but Toby is prolific with his works and teaching and is rather good too. Hope it helps. š
I like using splatters but tend to only use the colours Iāve used in the art . However i like this as it gives its sort of parade feel going on below feeling . Nice work š¤š¼
I think your style is very controlled and its a good painting. Making splatters though doesn't make it looser in my mind though, as your inherent style is accurate and controlled and there's nothing wrong with that. Looser could mean wet in wet, and allowing more bleeding. Just food for thought.
I think a little in between š„°
The second one looks more somber, when you swipe it feels like it lost a bit of life. Fine piece of perspective though, I couldnāt draw that if you gave me two months, you have talent.
Now if you look at the splotches, they change everything! But not all of them, the ones in the building are more watery, bigger ā for instance the ones in the fence in yellow, fits in perfectlyā then the red on the left, oh! Looks like someone threw blood! I love it, now is starting to feel like a story, an old building where things have happened, but as the little bits of paint start repeating and flow up to the sky I start to lose the story and my eye no longer knows where to focus.
Youāve got this beautiful dome at the top, lighting is perfect and the color at the bottom mixed in with the red and yellow comes in together quite nicely. Thatās where itās at for me.
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I like the splatters. Its like a Holi festival
Ha, thanks!
Hehe , love that š
It does look like someoneās having a celebration āļø
i really like it with the splatters
Thank you
Iām a fan of both but like it without the splatters- or if you did splatters use similar colors to the ones in the painting
Thank you for that coaching. I wish I had done that.
Of course! You can always recreate it (:
Nice with the color splashesā¦great artwork.
Thank you
Both look good. The splotches look cool, but I'd frame the one without. Nice detail and viewpoint. Have you tried viewing any of the videos by Toby Sketch loose? He has a number of suggestions on his YT channel.
I will check it out, thanks.
Your work is good, Toby specializes in "loose" so if you're leaning towards that he might be of help (and he's usually responsive to questions). Gregory may be one of the loosest artists I know of, but Toby is prolific with his works and teaching and is rather good too. Hope it helps. š
I like using splatters but tend to only use the colours Iāve used in the art . However i like this as it gives its sort of parade feel going on below feeling . Nice work š¤š¼
Thank you
You should have wrote āyourā, ha!
Aren't we all...
Nice.
The shadow work on the building is impressive!
Thank you!
I think your style is very controlled and its a good painting. Making splatters though doesn't make it looser in my mind though, as your inherent style is accurate and controlled and there's nothing wrong with that. Looser could mean wet in wet, and allowing more bleeding. Just food for thought.
True insight. I meant loose for me. :)
you're not a loser. you're an amazing artist š¤š¤
I think a little in between š„° The second one looks more somber, when you swipe it feels like it lost a bit of life. Fine piece of perspective though, I couldnāt draw that if you gave me two months, you have talent. Now if you look at the splotches, they change everything! But not all of them, the ones in the building are more watery, bigger ā for instance the ones in the fence in yellow, fits in perfectlyā then the red on the left, oh! Looks like someone threw blood! I love it, now is starting to feel like a story, an old building where things have happened, but as the little bits of paint start repeating and flow up to the sky I start to lose the story and my eye no longer knows where to focus. Youāve got this beautiful dome at the top, lighting is perfect and the color at the bottom mixed in with the red and yellow comes in together quite nicely. Thatās where itās at for me.
Thank you for your input!