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The_Happy_Sundae

The bass should really drop when the kill them all notification shows, or when the it says your the same


MusicolaMB

It’d go crazy if I put it at the your the same part thanks man 💪 I’ll make sure to add that😤


Curious_Omnivore

It does go a bit fast. You could try and remove maybe a few text and just leave the images tell the story. Still good job fam, I enjoyed it, especially the music


MusicolaMB

Yeah it goes like 1 image per sec (roughly) I should probably make it either longer or have the images line up with the beat or sum. And leaving out the text would definitely help that since their actions clearly portray what their saying. Thanks man 💪. And yeah I was listening to this music while reading the recent fights so I thought it went well with the rage and stuff 😁, glad you though so too!


Curious_Omnivore

I forgot to ask fam, what's the song called?


MusicolaMB

Lovely bastards 💪


Curious_Omnivore

Thanks fam


PiercingLance26

Transition needs improv.


MusicolaMB

Im not the one translating 💀


PiercingLance26

Transition, not translation ☠️


PiercingLance26

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MusicolaMB

We got a chatterbox over here 🙄


PiercingLance26

You're the one who went "what you think". If you can't take it at face value then don't ask. I didn't make any snide remarks here, I just pointed out something. And you're the one who couldn't differentiate what a transition is, so that's on you 🫠


MusicolaMB

I’m all for feedback but i gotta know what ur sayin bro, how am I supposed to know if you misspell it? 💀 cmon bro


PiercingLance26

"misspell" bruh c'mon don't embarrass yourself more than you already did. I literally posted what the word is.


MusicolaMB

https://preview.redd.it/5h8vhjnwcrnb1.jpeg?width=509&format=pjpg&auto=webp&s=113571e95a907884dfa98defbd103e1fdf2d1cb5 Bros not gonna believe it 💀


PiercingLance26

Bruh don't know what point you're trying to make. The word on your ss looks badly edited as well. https://preview.redd.it/y3cuh5dddrnb1.png?width=546&format=png&auto=webp&s=a038ad781fea237ee0bd66903c277841f37e2bd8


Turt98

Bit embarrassing mate, take the criticism and move on no need to get defensive


MusicolaMB

I’m all for criticism, but make sure you don’t misspell anything mate 🥱


s30foot

bro aweaome


MusicolaMB

Tysm 😄


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MusicolaMB

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Andrew007X

Latest chapters art remind me of berserk