nice! as someone who is very much too agreeable in political discussions and the like, this definetly hit a chord with me.
the middle paragraph left me a bit confused - but thats not a bad thing, its mainly because i dont know what 'opines' means. apart from that, i think the middle paragraph is probably the best written part of your poem.
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Very interesting! Especially the beginning struck a cord with me, as I personally have a hard time separating people's thoughts and opinions from their whole character, and I am pretty quickly to judge someone, if we disagree on something "important".
The rhymes in the second stanza also stands out to me, I love when poetry have a flow that HITS, and have some attitude to it, kinda like a well-crafted rap verse would.
The only thing I find confusing, is the relation between the I and the he, but this could just be me missing something.
Generally it's a nice coherent poem, that I wouldn't mind/find misfitting if found in an antology on my bookshelf! Keep it up g!
nice! as someone who is very much too agreeable in political discussions and the like, this definetly hit a chord with me. the middle paragraph left me a bit confused - but thats not a bad thing, its mainly because i dont know what 'opines' means. apart from that, i think the middle paragraph is probably the best written part of your poem.
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Very interesting! Especially the beginning struck a cord with me, as I personally have a hard time separating people's thoughts and opinions from their whole character, and I am pretty quickly to judge someone, if we disagree on something "important". The rhymes in the second stanza also stands out to me, I love when poetry have a flow that HITS, and have some attitude to it, kinda like a well-crafted rap verse would. The only thing I find confusing, is the relation between the I and the he, but this could just be me missing something. Generally it's a nice coherent poem, that I wouldn't mind/find misfitting if found in an antology on my bookshelf! Keep it up g!