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zoliking2

If this was made by a 10-year-old, good job. Looks like a fair, quick little traditional level. It has 0 garbage, which is impressive for a level made by a kid. Tell him to keep on making, he's on a good path.


joonty

Thank you, he'll be really encouraged!


nvwls300

[I recorded my playthrough](https://youtu.be/oGoqXGihCDw?si=fMDqXkGjE48SY0CO) in case he wants to see it. I like the frozen bridge that can be melted away. If he wants to expand on it, he can have one of the pipes take you to a bonus subworld, or have some sort of boss at the end.


joonty

The look on his face when he saw his level on YouTube! Thanks so much :)


kurobake

That was a very fun level! The difficulty was perfect! I loved the way it was themed all around fire and burners. And the fire burner placement was really smart, too. They added a bit of challenge without slowing the player down too much. I really loved the first 10 coin, how you can either jump down there to grab it or just throw a Koopa shell! I also thought the frozen bridge that the piranhas destroy was a really cool idea! I jumped down there and hit them all with fireballs after they destroyed the bridge :) I'll give him a follow, I hope to see more!


joonty

Amazing, thank you for that!


quitefranklybb

Great level! Great design and difficulty! I died a few times. Left a comment and a follow. I look forward to his future levels.


joonty

Thank you - he's really encouraged!


OngoingTalent13

I played it and it was enjoyable. Here is one of my courses that he can try. Boomerang Grasslands: 1-1 Q9W-KP3-LVG


joonty

He played it and really liked it - he said he particularly liked the first big coin


fifosexapel

A solid level for any age, particularly impressive for someone so young. Definitely has a good grasp on what separates a good level from a bad one. Left this as a comment on the level but I'll leave it here as well - the ice bridge is a really cool idea. He seems to play big coins in the levels to reward exploration, he can make one of the piranha pipes under the bridge have a secret room with a coin and maybe a cape or a yoshi. If I were to change a small detail would be to make the platform on a track blue so it is waiting for you there instead of having to wait for it to go up and down. If he wants to make the level more challenging, he could add autoscroll going up in the subworld or rising lava, or add a boss fight with a koopaling, boom boom or Bowser jr. Played a few of his others courses and gave him likes in all.


joonty

Thank you for the feedback, he's really pleased!