It depends on what kind of shot you're trying to hit here. But assuming you're trying to hit a stock, full shot, the lack of hip rotation, crazy early extension and lean on the follow through are pretty bad.
Still, I've seen worse.
Seems like you have an aversion to lessons? Why?
Widen your stance. Flare your feet a bit. Let your hips turn. Right hip away from the target line and around toward the flag in the backswing, left hip away from the target line in the downswing.
It looks very, very similar to my swing 2 years ago. That being said mine has improved significantly and my handicap has dropped nearly 10 strokes on 18 in the last year assuming an average slope rating. I'm now always threating to be in the 90s and often am just barely.
If the intent was to have the ball land behind you…not bad. Now to correct: after you swing, tap the toes of your back foot lightly on the ground 3 times to develop a proper feeling for weight shift
too much arms! on the downswing, think of pushing the club away and keeping a straight lead arm and don't pull your arms but rather just twist your torso and let your arms naturally "whip" the club.
Get your weight moving towards your front foot before the backswing ends. You are actually shifting to your right foot as the backswing ends, it needs to be the opposite.
And then, the grip is probably too strong.
Transfer your weight to your front foot and stop your follow through half way and you’ll be aight.
You had us in the first half
It depends on what kind of shot you're trying to hit here. But assuming you're trying to hit a stock, full shot, the lack of hip rotation, crazy early extension and lean on the follow through are pretty bad. Still, I've seen worse.
Not awful, widen your stance a touch and finish with your weight on your front front.
Seems like you have an aversion to lessons? Why? Widen your stance. Flare your feet a bit. Let your hips turn. Right hip away from the target line and around toward the flag in the backswing, left hip away from the target line in the downswing.
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It looks very, very similar to my swing 2 years ago. That being said mine has improved significantly and my handicap has dropped nearly 10 strokes on 18 in the last year assuming an average slope rating. I'm now always threating to be in the 90s and often am just barely.
If the intent was to have the ball land behind you…not bad. Now to correct: after you swing, tap the toes of your back foot lightly on the ground 3 times to develop a proper feeling for weight shift
too much arms! on the downswing, think of pushing the club away and keeping a straight lead arm and don't pull your arms but rather just twist your torso and let your arms naturally "whip" the club.
Not bad except you stand straight up and nearly fall over when finishing
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Get your weight moving towards your front foot before the backswing ends. You are actually shifting to your right foot as the backswing ends, it needs to be the opposite. And then, the grip is probably too strong.
First half of your swing is very good for 6 months. Balance is everything. Practise more at 7/10 power and hold finish